Hats Off

Working on "Hats off to you kids". This is one of my few finished stories. Right now I'm just going through and correcting little typos, but it needs some revision, though I don't know where. It doesn't always capture the mood I'm looking for, but I'm a little clueless as to what to change without being verbose. Certainly it is one of my favorite stories, but reading it, it doesn't match up to the perception of it in my head.